I got a professional critique done of my book, and here is a snippet of it:
'Overall, I enjoyed this manuscript. Elves are always a fascinating subject for your intended market, and they will find this material very entertaining. The readers will love Ava and Jack, and the readers will enjoy watching them as this storyline progresses. You do seem to understand what your readers want and need from a manuscript.
I feel that this storyline is well thought out, well paced, and well written. Your various characters are well rounded, interesting, and they add to the plot and storyline.'
